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Why You Need to Put Your Readers and Their Needs First

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If you were giving away a Hawaiian vacation to people who signed up for your webinar, which would you lead with? The vacation or the webinar?

From what I’ve seen — from training more than 25,000 communicators in more than 1,000 organizations over 20 years — most folks would choose the webinar.

Sign up for our webinar
and get a dream trip to Hawaii!

But leading with the webinar won’t grab your readers’ attention and move them to act.

Instead, lead with the benefits and substantiate with the features:

Get a dream trip to Hawaii
when you sign up for our webinar

Focus on your reader’s wants and needs first, then follow up with your organization and its products, services and ideas.

Lead with the benefits.

Here’s how one of my clients did it in a recent persuasive-writing workshop:

DON’T lead with the features:

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DO lead with the benefits:

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DON’T lead with the features:

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DO lead with the benefits:

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DON’T lead with the features:

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DO lead with the benefits:

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DON’T lead with the features:

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DO lead with the benefits:

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DON’T lead with the features:

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DO lead with the benefits:

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DON’T lead with the features:

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DO lead with the benefits:

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Make the switch.

Sometimes, a small switch is all you need to put the benefits first.  Here’s how it works in a Silver Anvil Award-winning campaign.

DON’T lead with the features:

National Semiconductor’s Workbench Sensor Designer tool enables engineers to quickly move from concept to simulation to prototype in a few keystrokes.

DO lead with the benefits:

Engineers who typically take weeks to design sensor systems can now complete their designs in minutes, thanks to a new online design tool.

Next time you write a press release, blog post or content-marketing piece, put the reader first. Lead with the benefits; substantiate with the features.

Ann Wylie works with communicators who want to reach more readers and with organizations that want to get the word out. To learn more about her training, consulting or writing and editing services, contact her at ann@WylieComm.com. Get FREE writing tips here. Find more than 2,000 writing tip sheets at RevUpReadership.com.

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